The main feedback that I received touched base on the audio and acting. In the beginning of the opener, the music cut out and left part of it mute. Also, the peers strongly believed that there should be more emotions in the actors. This would make it more believable.
I understand the suggestions and agree. I am not the best actor and it was difficult staying serious while acting. Kevin and Josh are both very goofy people who were joking during the film. I gave Josh a script and he could not follow it.
I may refilm the parts of the opener where there is acting. I may use a different actor who is more serious. Also, I will add music in the beginning and may shoot that part from different angles to make it more interesting. I could also add more camera angles and more information to the disease.
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